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Here's a link to my pamphlet.
It's in PDf form, but the original is in Publisher and is meant to be a tri-fold.
Any suggestions and critiques will be appreciated.
Thanks!

http://www.sendspace.com/file/lhoxi4

(scroll down to get the download link. It's in PDF form)

I think advertising should give people an idea of what a product or service will cost. Obviously you might charge much more for larger or longer events, etc. but it may be a good idea to put a "teaser price" on the brochure for your least expensive offering.

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Jeff Wheeler, moonlight DJ/KJ

Diafel, I just sent you seven samples. Should be arriving momentarily for you. Let me know that/if they have arrived okay or if I need to resend.

K

Please don't be angry with me.

There is nothing exciting there.
Nothing to make me want to keep the pamphlet.
The pics look dismal.

You can do better than that.
Someone has to tell you & you may as well hate me.

My thoughts:

Are you looking to sell karaoke to places that don't have it or looking to convince people you're the host they need for the act once they've decided?

This is aimed at someone who is already sold on karaoke and is looking for a host. It doesn't scream you need karaoke for your venue/event. Again, that may be the intent.

The "Why Choose" section hits the high points and should be in any brochure although I'm not sure why I want repeat customers to my St. Patty's Day/birthday/retirement party.

Personally I would have two separate pieces of marketing material. One for the commercial customer who is looking to make money off your entertainment and one that says you're going to ensure the people there have fun. Sure there are a lot of high points that can cover both aspects like your "Why choose" section but the aims for both, and the prices, are going to be different.

I suggest you leave pricing off the brochure. Use the old covering a full range of events from small and intimate to your own personal concert and let you decide the pricing from there.

Diafel you are now going to not rush it through.
You will introduce imagination and
make me eat my words.
Tons of detail can be too much.
Your pamphlet with imagination will read
I just got to have this.

No rush.
You can do this.

After what I have done.
Want to see me bad....
I was so busy with people & I got volumes off by a mile.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XKc1JFRw4KQ

Let it run through once then it will play ok.

You could probably jazz things up a bit if you got a few lights. (ducking from impending Diafel lecture on hijack.)

It was a strangers Cell phone who was into Led Zep.
Loved Pizza apparently.